Post by starkiller on Dec 8, 2008 17:06:08 GMT -5
I'm posting this here because it would probably transfer into after Respirals. It is my idea of a story to send into pizza, but i wanted to see what you thought of it first.
Prologue:
After a stunning defeat, grievous loses his firm grip on Coruscant and clones retake some of the planet. knowing he cannot let Coruscant be retaken, he takes matters into his own hands.
An elegant ship drops out of the sky onto a landing platform near the center of Corscant. On the other side of the platform is General Grievous flanked by elite droids. Dooku comes out of the ship, and walks toward Grievous. When Dooku passes him, Grievous turns and walks with him.
Grievous: You will be happy to know that the takeover is going well-
Dooku: Well? The senate has not been taken, you've lost control of 10% of the planet, and clones are beating your enormous droid army.
Grievous: It wasn't my-
Dooku: You dissapoint me. First Naboo and now this. I am taking matters into my own hands. For the time being, I am the Commander of the Droid Armies, and I have complete control over your acts. Do not fail me again, General. Now go out with your advance troops and root out the clones while awaiting orders.
Grievous: And what is to become of the leader of the advance troops, Command Jesut?
Dooku: I have a special mission for him. He will lead a fleet of airships carrying the U-77, a new weapon that destroys DNA structure.
Dooku steps into an airspeeder at the edge of the platform. Grievous tries to follow.
Dooku: You think you're coming in here? You ride in the other one, preprogrammed to take you to sector 651.
Grievous glances at the airspeeder.
Grievous: It's an airspeeder for front lines mititary purposes!
Dooku: And what all field commanders ride in.
The speeder takes off without another word.
What do you think of it so far?
Prologue:
After a stunning defeat, grievous loses his firm grip on Coruscant and clones retake some of the planet. knowing he cannot let Coruscant be retaken, he takes matters into his own hands.
An elegant ship drops out of the sky onto a landing platform near the center of Corscant. On the other side of the platform is General Grievous flanked by elite droids. Dooku comes out of the ship, and walks toward Grievous. When Dooku passes him, Grievous turns and walks with him.
Grievous: You will be happy to know that the takeover is going well-
Dooku: Well? The senate has not been taken, you've lost control of 10% of the planet, and clones are beating your enormous droid army.
Grievous: It wasn't my-
Dooku: You dissapoint me. First Naboo and now this. I am taking matters into my own hands. For the time being, I am the Commander of the Droid Armies, and I have complete control over your acts. Do not fail me again, General. Now go out with your advance troops and root out the clones while awaiting orders.
Grievous: And what is to become of the leader of the advance troops, Command Jesut?
Dooku: I have a special mission for him. He will lead a fleet of airships carrying the U-77, a new weapon that destroys DNA structure.
Dooku steps into an airspeeder at the edge of the platform. Grievous tries to follow.
Dooku: You think you're coming in here? You ride in the other one, preprogrammed to take you to sector 651.
Grievous glances at the airspeeder.
Grievous: It's an airspeeder for front lines mititary purposes!
Dooku: And what all field commanders ride in.
The speeder takes off without another word.
What do you think of it so far?